If I were a jury member of the
committee chosing the person of the year, my candidate would be Fernando
Muslera, who is a Uruguayan footballer playing as a goalkeeper for Turkish
club Galatasaray and the Uruguayan national team. He was selected as the
7th best goalkeeper in the world in 2010 and 6th best goalkeeper in the
world in 2011. He began his career at Montevideo Wanderers and Nacional,
moving to Lazio in 2007 where he won the 2009 Coppa Italia Final. In 2011,
he was signed by Galatasaray for around €12. While
choosing the person of the year, I would take into consideration some features
such as successfulness, making progress in his/her business, and politeness.
In view of these characteristics, Muslera fits to be chosen the people
of the year. First of all, he is a successful goalkeeper. He usually clears
the ball and prevents his team to lose points. Moreover, he is chosen the
goalkeeper of the year in 2015. Secondly, he is making progress in his career.
For example, the first match he played, he conceded a goal in the first
minute of the game. However, in 2012, he scored a penalty goal, his first
and only goal. Furthermore, with his clearing the ball, he contributed to
his team to be Champion in 2015. Last but not least, he is a polite person.
For instance, once, he congratulated the footballer, who scored a goal
to himself, by stroking his cheek. Also, his attitude was appreciated by the
supporter of Fenerbahçe. In conclusion, by virtue of these reasons, my candidate
would be Fernando Muslera.
Hi Hayriye :)
YanıtlaSilFirstly, I want to say that you clearly pointed the reasons for why you would choose Fernando Muslera as jury member. Your reasons sounds logical and coherent.As you said, the person who would be a jury member for an election should have the qualities which are needed, also. It gives people the feeling of being sincere. I know your favourite team is GS and it is my favourite one, also. Thank you for contribution sweety !
Take care of yourselves...
Hi Arzu :)
SilThank you for your good and sincere remarks :D take care of yourself, too :*
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SilHi Hayriye:)
YanıtlaSilYour choice is really interesting,I was really surprised when I read your paragraph.I do not like football but I enjoyed while reading your paragraph.Your organization and flow of ideas are so good.I think you can write well in any subject when you want:) As far as I read, there is no grammer mistake.I do not like GS; I support FB, but Muslera is a perfect choice for the jurry.I know he is very qualified.Your conclusion is true. As a supporter of FB, I also appreciate his attitudes.
Thank you for your contribution,please keep writing for us 😄😄
Hi Büşra :)
SilFirstly, I didn't know you support Fenerbahçe, but thank you so much your nice comments :*
Hi Hayriye,
YanıtlaSilLet me express some surprise seeing the above reflection of yours pertaining to football, as it is not a so common interest for young ladies. Nonetheless, your text is quite well organized reflecting your points on the issue in an orderly and logic manner. What is more, you seem to be higly informed about the career history of Muslera. This has enabled you to provide impressing details. But let me comment out that you seem to have forgotten a "million" after € 12. Poor Muslera:) By the way, your use of punctuation deserves praise.
Hi Hayriye,
YanıtlaSilFirst of all, I am really satisfied with your choice, Fernando Muslera. I love football and I am fan of Galatasaray, I know you are, too. I am totally agree with your ideas.The way you follow to express your ideas and organization are pretty good. I have not seen any grammar mistakes and your paragraps is coherent. I had no difficulty in understanding it.
Thanks for your contribution, keep writing.
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